Starbreaker: Volume 1

Starbreaker

De: Luke Chmilenko

Narrado por: Neil Hellegers

“Born of a pyre ten thousand souls strong. When stars are right his home will die.

Hollow of heart; black hunger unending. Eater of light. Vanquishing kings.

Doom in hand; pour loose the sands of time. Ender of hope. Feller of storms.

Twinmaidens blood stains; on sorrowful soles. Fast claimed war’s domain. Glad of war. Glad of pain.

Beast eyes close for him. Vault’s gates open.

Starbreaker, thrice named.

Starbreaker, awake.”

(Prophecy of Aion Origin, date unknown)

Sylvas Vail is a big fish in a small pond, the most powerful mage on his planet. But when the doors to the cosmos come crashing open and all the untold wonders and terrors of the universe come pouring in, he is left with only two options:

Ascend or die.

©2024 Luke Chmilenko (P)2025 Audible, Inc.

So far SO GOOD

Luke really brings the same quality of writing in this book that we’ve seen in his others like the iron prince series. He’s done a great job at introducing a very interesting and fun idea and executing it perfectly. So much so that I’d say my excitement only grew as the book progressed! All I can say is please release these gems faster! Although, I’m sure everyone understands if it takes a while to write so well.

Enjoyable

Best by author in awhile. Have tried the author a few times before but can never get into his books. Hopefully this series will be better than just another scratch in the mud.

Protagonist is bland.

I don't know if this is by design, but the protagonist has zero traits other than "determined to always advance" and "being neurotic obsessive compulsive"
I don't know if this is the author's attempt at making a neurodivergent protagonist, but it was very annoying to have to listen to this protagonist basically just disconnect his way through the whole story. He drifted through every scene with minimal interaction with anyone. The only things that would ever get an emotional reaction out of him, were if something happened to threaten his position as "The Chosen One" or "Number One Wizard" status. If he was at risk of being held back from class, he would go into a mental spiral of rage and anxiety. He was determined to do anything and everything to advance, and while that's a pretty common trope, often referred to as the Determinator, I don't feel like he's written very well this time. Which I find odd because Luke has written other characters similar to this, who actually have a personality. Namely Raiden Ward from the Stormbringer Series, is a FANTASTIC example of a Determinator. He's stubborn, self-destructive when it comes to training, and unwilling to consider ANY amount of common sense and caution when it comes to the risks he will put himself through. He was also someone with charisma, charm, and an actual personality. The protagonist of this book, Starbreaker? He's like a blank slate, intentionally made without any defining traits because......some reason I guess? I dunno, I found him difficult to empathize with overall. He was too detached, too standoffish for my liking. It feels deliberate, given how well the author personalized everyone ELSE in the book, and in other books he's written, still doesn't mean I enjoy reading that type of character

Solid new series

Started out like many others, but quickly turned into the quality work we’ve come to expect from Luke. Great magic system, likable characters, and interesting world. Looking forward to the next one. It’s definitely worth your credit

Most organic intro to a progression fantasy ever!!

Really well done. Love it. Consider me a fan.
Even the MC's trauma n his personality feels organic.
You know this is a fantasy story, but that said a lot of books are still very clumsy about how they introduce u into the whole fantasy world, and magic powers situation. Every story in this genre has to explain to the reader where they are and what is happening ...but this story really nailed it.

I fully enjoyed this book, but even so you can tell all the really cool stuff is yet to come.
Highly recommend checking this on out!!!

looking forward to the next book

Great start to a new series. Very interesting mix of tropes and genres. narrator was excellent. it reminds me a bit of Starships Mage series

Hopefully Luke keeps writing this one…

The author has a habit of starting an amazing franchise and then forgetting about it and starting a new one without a conclusion. Hopefully that doesn’t happen here.

Helleger is an okay narrator but the audio was clipping during the action sequences, that’s more of an audio engineer issue though.

I am disappointed in Luke

I've been a fan of Luke's work for a while now but this is the worst book he's created. We have wuxia sect masquerading as a military. Instructors that would rather sneer, mock, or watch them kill each other rather than actually teach. And a training program that seems like it's just trying to pump out battle ready mages as fast as it can instead of actually training people.

Boring

No idea how this book got good reviews, it’s extremely slow paced, mc has no real purpose in life and the story seems so have been written with long breaks in between some chapters as it doesn’t really follow a real goal.

Pocket sand really-_-

I couldn’t believe it really came down to pocket sand decent read though worth can’t wait to see how it progresses