Ajax's Ascension

The Divine Witness

By: Keleros

Narrated by: Boise Blue, Ally Frey

Reborn on Gryndor with the mythical trait [Divine Witness], Ajax swears to live a life of no regrets. This time, he will seize every opportunity, fight every monster, and plunder every treasure as he enjoys life to the fullest.

If only it were that easy. Humans are considered one of the weakest sentient races, confined to their patch of land but that hasn't changed their nature as they fight amongst themselves forced to split their sources of power instead of unite for the greater whole. In order to see the entire vast richness of the world, Ajax must battle for his life and respect, gaining levels and forcing the other races to acknowledge his and humanities worth.

Ajax’s Ascension to the top won’t be quick or easy.

©2024 Keleros (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Ajax’s

Like the series waiting for the next one. It is an enjoyable series readable on royal road

Good

I love the book good plot, twists and action the only real problem I have is how long and boring reading the stats was besides that I can’t wait for book 2

good book but

Good book but to many stats... less stats please. The story itself is interesting and I'm going to try the next book.
Narration was awesome!!

Great story, better to read than audible

Great story, highly suggest. better to read than listen to audible. reason is that about half of every chapter is rereading his stats.... probably a good 25% of the hours in audible are reading stats.

good overall

my only complaint is the length of the stat reviews. perhaps not so robotic or slow when reading it off.

Solid character and power leveling

The story is steady with only a couple moments (The character being too lucky). But it is engaging through out! The power leveling of the main character is great!! He is developing his powers but done right. He’s not a god and has real challenges to overcome. And the character isn’t overly self centered! Great listen! I’m on to the second one with high expectations!

liked the story was engaging

Liked the tempo of the story that does focus on things but does allow for small jumps in the timeline

It's nice ...but its gimicky

I like the story. In fact I love this kind of story, but there's things in this one that annoy me. This artificial sense of drama built up around keeping ur stats n whatnot private. It's not really that original. A lot of books include some sense of importance around keeping ur info private, but this book focuses on it waaaaaay too much ...n it also doesn't do a great job of making it feel organic with the story. It feels forced the way it's done n it breaks my immersion. It detracts from the story for me. Like, instead of adding depth to the story it feels like an annoying distraction that the author keeps circling back to. Like, geez give it a rest already.
That's my 2 cents. I still like the story, but I just recognize that this aspect of it cud be a lot better.

Good but not great

This book has a lot of potential and I really liked how the writer develops the magic system. The biggest caring problem however is that constant 5 minute Stat updates..... Make them a chapter I can skip and don't include changes into the Stat update.... It's toiling sitting there listening to the narrator read of numbers for minutes at a time.

I really enjoyed that the MC wasn't over powered from the start and actually built himself up

re reading the status sheet gets old after a while. maybe they could just recap the changes