Lunar Alpha 1

A LitRPG/GameLit Adventure

By: Magnus Reid

Narrated by: Anita Golde

When I went out target shooting in the woods, I wasn’t expecting to be abducted by a race of alien bunny girls from another star system.

They weren’t there for me; they didn’t even know there was intelligent life on Earth. They were just conducting some battle drills in the forest and they saw me practicing my shot for my family’s annual hunting trip.

Now, short a good marksman, they want me to help to defend their ‘portal’ on Alpha Centauri from a race of aggressive robot AI killers, the very race that conquered their home star and the dozen stars they retreated to after each defeat. If the robots take Alpha Centauri, Sol - Earth’s star - is next.

I don’t think my friends and family would appreciate being enslaved by deadly alien robots....

After fifteen years of war, there are hardly any men left in their race and the girls are desperate to repopulate. I definitely don’t mind lending a helping hand there. Let’s just say that’s something I’m good at. But surviving the "beacon battles" - 5v5 skirmishes - on other planets and moons...that’s not quite so simple.

©2021 Magnus Reid (P)2021 Magnus Reid

cool story

I only have one pet peeve to mention. if you make the mc an 18 yo that explains him being an idiot. can you try in the future to make him at least a college student. it makes the sex scenes less awkward and 18 year old male sex experts do not exist. lots who think they are.
over-all the story was cool. Anita Golde did a great job , thanks

Everything is good except

Everything is good except the mc … I just hate the mc nothing redeeming about him, he’s kinda stupid but cause he’s mc he gets away with everything… he wins wars that the bunnies have been fighting for years with no tactical or battlefield experience… he too dumb to learn anything about the women it’s just ugh lets make babies but then panicked when they turn up pregnant… no depth to anything, story is fun I did enjoy that , but the mc and no background or real attachment to his lovers Is like the author was retelling a drunken one night stand while watching B sci-fi movies and coming out of a fever dream … it’s so bad I won’t pick up the next book I just think it’s okay but really the mc killed it with stupidity and his way unbelievable “skills” that he shouldn’t and couldn’t do …. Skipping this author in the future for such dribble

decent, but mc is ridiculous

a fun story, but it was nearly ruined by a supposedly adult mc that is being questioned by police after missing less than 24 hours and is grounded by his mother. they treated him like he was 15 or even younger. the correct answer to all the questions they gave, is "none of your business." He needs to grow up.

Story concept good

Concept good a lot of broken story telling by the author. The performer was good.

oof

The story of the book made no sense, but it is smut. Sex scenes were ok, they could use a little more effort and detail. The narrator was good choose, and personally I found it hilarious the way she says fat p u s s y.

Mok's review

The main character is not borderline retarded. He is completely retarded riding the short bus qualifications.

it was not to bad

there is not a lot of sex or stats tho there may be more next book Anita did a pretty good job tho does need a lil more practice with the male voices story was far better then I thought it would be the combat I do like over 4 star it kinda felt like something was missing and so my 4

If a 14 year old virgin wrote erotica...

Then you would get this book. Honestly just... don't. The main character is cringy, limp wristed, and awkward AF. the femail characters are 2d cardboard cutouts from a list of female character tropes. Sure, there is sex, but, as I alluded to before, as imagined by a sexually naive child.

And all of this is set in a video game lile universe that has as much realism as... a video game universe.

like I said... just... don't.