Don't F*ck with the Healer!: DFWTH

LitRPG/Isekai/Light Novel (Vanta Fantasies, Book 2)

By: Blac Lyte

Narrated by: Melody Celeste

When a young White user and her party wander into a high-level zone, things quickly go awry. Now, in order to survive, she is forced to cultivate her strength in a hostile place filled with monsters lurking in every corner.

Will Ayana obtain the strength she needs to survive or end up as another skeleton by the wayside?

©2020 Dana Bullock (P)2020 Dana Bullock

it has potential

An interesting start for a new author and a new narrator.

Somebody gets transported to a new world and makes a completely new start. They decide to be a healer and find themselves in a tricky situation without their party in a in a zone that's much too high for their level.

not a bad way to spend an afternoon or an evening.

Not bad... Questionable moral, uncreative pc

The premise is isekai the intro. is... o.k. the plot is passable but uncreative and leaves a LOT of questions unanswered and possible story directions unexplored. The character appears to be(despite what we are told) an agro murder hobo(and unappreciative) by the end one is left to wonder if the goddess is actually evil as the moral she imparts seems like either sophistry or pure gasslighting.

Finally(and this is a matter of personal taste, your milage may vary), by the end of the book I was very much starved for an other character.

Awful. Just awful.

I kept listening thinking surely it had to get better. I was wrong. This is truly the worst book I have ever read/listened to. The author has obviously never played a healer class. Turns the character into a fighter. The book spends 90% of it's time talking about stats. There is no story at all. No plotline. No character creation. In addition the vocal performance was boring. Probably because she was bored to death reading it to us.

good, but short, story, and poor performance

as I say in the header, the story itself is pretty decent, hitting alot of my favorite points such as; obviously, being reborn in another world, over powered mc who ot there through both exploits nd hard work, brave mc, and a classic magic system.
Now, for where I find it could improve. Sometimes the mc makes downright stupid decisions, or good decisions for stupid reasons, like wanting to face off against an enemy she think she'll die from instead of literally trying again in 24 hrs. For some reason, the mc is favored, by the powers that be, over other people who are seemingly no differant than her and she isnt really anything special. also, the buffs she unlocks make no sense, a buffer generally buffs others, but themselves, so buffs should last anywhere from 5 minutes to an hour, not 15 seconds. and lastly, the story is just much too short and doesnt really let you see the mc use her newfound skill.

all I will say about the narrator was that they were some of the worst I've ever heard, worse then some robots, even. they dont know how to read, often pausing in the wrong moments and saying something with the wrong intonation, and often sounding downright looney when I dont think that's what the author was going for. hope to see improvement. I think the problem was they didnt read what they were going to narrate beforehand, and thus didnt really understand the tone of what they were reading.