Alpha’s Forbidden Mate

An Enemies to Lovers Paranormal Shifter Romance

By: Luna Sharp

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Auctioned off at the Alpha shifter ball, my fear turned into my fated mate.

Searching for my twin sister had left me broke and up for auction at the Alpha shifters Ball.

Adrian, the alluring Wolf who bought me, expected submission.

All he got from me was a slap in the face.

Despite my insubordination, he offered to help find my sister.

In exchange, I was at his service.

Working with him tested my resolve as I tried to deny the desire I had for his talented tongue.

I indulge in the attention he provides, and he fills me with more than satisfaction and joy.

But when my magical powers began to emerge, the pack viewed me as a threat and wanted me dead.

Now, with the return of an ancient threat, my alpha will have to save me before my dangerous magic unleashes an evil destined to consume us all.

I can’t with the virtual voice narrator

Honestly the story may be good but I couldn’t focus on it at all due to the VV narrator. The inflection is all wrong and sounds most of the time monotone /nasal . It is not worth a credit or the number of hours required to listen to it.

not a gan of narration.

maybe story would be better if real narrators would do it, besides that- heroin is annoying, she supposed to pore orphan, living with Bad stepmother, but she is super spoiled, super ungrateful, and honestly a little bit too much " I need to find my sister, I need to find my sister and leave, I need to find my sister, I need to leave"

Not a fan of the AI narra

Please just hire a real person. I'll even take the woman that seems to narrate all the paranormal romance books. Also, the content puts me in mind of fan fiction. And it's all the place.

Not bad but not great

Story has good potential but needs to be read by a couple of people rather than just one. With the one person, not even changing tones in voice, it’s hard to follow along with conversations and the story seems monotone, therefore becomes almost boring. Just my opinion.

not worth the money

the Virtual Voice was bad, like listening to a phone menu 10 years ago bad. the same droning slightly nasal narration no matter what the scene. the same voice for all characters so that I can't distinguish between them.

often the story distracts me from the VV, but this one is written nearly as badly as it is spoken. please, get a good editor to catch the mistakes and gaps!

Disappointing

I realized it wasn’t real actors but was disappointed on the lack of emotion and or wrong pitch at the reading. Also should have had Female/male voices

I like the magical powers

It’s a good book , the main character sucks and cries to much and clearly doesn’t understand a mate bond. Put herself if reckless situations . Don’t bother reading