Primeval

Guardian Craft, Book 1

De: Eden Redd

Narrado por: Valentina Ortiz

The world is dying, and Will could care less.

Will Asher thought he was going to spend his last days in a cell thinking about the one bad thing he ever did in his life. When he is tapped to be the first human to undergo a special experiment, he accepts, knowing full well it could be the end of this life and a beginning to a new one.

When he wakes in a new digital world, he finds himself struggling to defend against strange creatures and the elements while surviving the virtual environment. The player will have to overcome the odds as he fights against mythical monsters, finds mysterious allies, and uncovers a mystical journey that will have implications across the multiverse.

Can Will stay true to his path when the gods of this new world demand for his worship, or his destruction?

Warning: Guardian Craft: Primeval is an epic fantasy and science fiction story for mature adults, 18 and over.

©2019 Eden Redd (P)2019 Eden Redd

Another great story

The story is a slow ride ride into greatness. It has everything from world building, monster fighting, and little lewd moments Moments here and there.

Needs a bit more proof reading

Kept hearing the “player” instead of the MC’s name in quite a lot as narrating the action please fix it and will be phenomenal book series.

irritating start but you warm up to it

SPOILER WARNING

it's minecraft with different names for things and some extra mobs
it was a little annoying at first

ALSO!
you take 4 damage you have 6 hearts remaining.
the weapon is imbude with lightness ability, the weapon is now magic

...hearts are a lame term but forgivable but lightness ability? lightness? it isn't clear if this is weight or luminal "lightness"

Excellent

I highly recommend I do like this series hope the next comes soon I hope they make a lot

Worth the time

Great book, just what I'd expect from Redd. A good mix of game and story.

Might give book 2 a read or listen,

To he honest before chapter one was finished I was hoping the procedure failed and chapter 2 would be another attempt with a different character. Side effects from that procedure softens the hate I felt for the MC after chapter 1 but never truly left.

The story lacks structure and is a little disjointed. For example it took a month to finish a project all was working on. However instead of dealing with the development of relationship, rather of friendship or romantic bonds. Time is simply spend up with nothing but the project getting accomplished. The struggles they faced during that process should have helped build and define relationships but due to the fastforwarding of time after a month we are still at the starting point. Keep in mind more time passed during the lost month then prior to starting it. So as the second real adventure begins we should have a close team but due to the lack of character development it's as if the second adventure is only days after the first instead of weeks.

The story is redeemable hence why I will give book 2 a try. With that said I don't have much faith I will be finishing it. It seems like most writers today are more worried about getting from A to B without really diving into the journey of actually getting there. That journey is where the bonds are forged between people. I want to see the forging of those bonds not that they magically appeared. The struggles shape who we are and who will we become. Without them we are left well will a book like this one.

The harem ate the book....

The book had some real potential... but the harem - constant overly detailed sexual encounters ate the story no real story line just filler between Encounters if your looking for a RPG style porno then this book is for you if your looking for a good adventure or story line look somewhere ells....