Goblin Girl Maid Service Omnibus

Books 1-3: A Slice-of-Life Fantasy Adventure

De: Landon Scott, Marcus Sloss

Narrado por: Mandy McCullough

The entire series in a single offering!

Build our business, beat the competition, and fall for a goblin girl (or three).

My life definitely wasn’t going according to plan, but that all changed the moment I died unexpectedly. Now I’ve been reborn into the fantasy metropolis of Dragonmont City, where I get a second chance to flourish.

A twist of fate brings me into contact with Paulina, the proud but troubled owner of Goblin Girl Maid Service. Together with her slightly crazy best friend Kennedi, these two insanely beautiful goblin girls are trying to get their struggling business off the ground.

But the competition, in the form of bearded dwarf ladies with a serious attitude problem, has never been stiffer.

I’m going to do everything I can to help these lovely green ladies build the life of their dreams. Maybe I just might find something that always eluded me in my old life—a place to call home.

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Outstanding Tale, Wonderful Scenes

The story was well written and hashed out. It repeated its own themes in the most satisfying way with payoff for earlier seeded ideas. It was subtle enough to keep most guessing but made enough sense that those versed in media or paying enough attention to see an upcoming twist. Well done, overall.

Soft core fantasy erotica

Standard harem in just barely a fantasy land. A whole scene is about proper chemical balance in a hot tub. Hot stuff with strip Mario Cart. Very bro oriented.

Trite plot, Uninteresting Characters

The plot is trite. The non-human characters, despite being in a fantasy world, act exactly like humans and have nothing unique about them.

A sweet and overall fun story though perhaps missing something

This was certainly enjoyable. The characters are lively and fun and brought to life quite well by the narrator though I would have enjoyed it just a bit more if it actually had a male narrator, even if there just aren’t a great many male characters.

Movie along, there was not anything particularly wrong with the story but I still felt like it could have used more world building and maybe a tiny bit more character development.

You’re very quickly thrown in with the main character as he wakes up in his new world and while I have no issues with the usual isekai/portal fantasy setup, I still felt like a bit more explanation on how and why it happened. It is never really explained and while that initially made it feel a bit rushed or “empty” the characters help to fill that initial void, especially when the cast very quickly increases in the second volume.

Overall, nothing really wrong with this series, but it doesn’t do much to stand out among the many works in this genre and doesn’t leave a particularly strong impression when all is said and done.

In the end, it’s a fun slice-of-life fantasy with a fair amount naughty fun but I would recommend waiting until it’s on sale or simply using the discounted price one can get by borrowing or purchasing the cheaper Kindle edition.

Obviously Two dudes wrote this

the writing is too simple but the lady that talks is doing a great job.

A lot of First.

I enjoy greatly enjoyed the series. I had a crap ton of moments where I just listening, but then a character would say something that would completely trigger a boisterous and sudden outburst of laughing. Though I'm not a big fan of sex in being in books I read or listen to, but that is simple because I tend to read or listen to them in public and find it annoying to walk around or do work with an erection. Though the story was really cheesy and cliche. The story was done so well and I actually enjoyed the roller-coaster of emotions that each of the characters went through. I loved the growth of each of the characters and the hind sight of the protagonist as he eventually understood his situation or self. It was nice and refreshing for him to be so sure of himself and not just flip flopping between happiness and sadness. He was consistent with his emotions and that made me enjoy him all the more.

As for the Narrator, I enjoyed her performance and rendition of each character. They were all different and memorable. I didn't know of this Narrator prior to this audio book. So I will be adding her to my list of Narrators to look out for when choose a new book to hear in the future. I have a small list of favorites and she just became one of them.

Thank foe the wonderful and light story. I will look out for more of them in the future.

not bad but the authors need a new editor

ok, so let me preface this by saying... this is not a bad story. I don't want my criticism seen as disgust for the story.

overall the story has a good feel to it. it's not good but it's not bad, if you're just looking for something more like a slice of life rather than epic high fantasy then it's a decent listen.

the voice actress needs help though. she's kind of a one trick pony on all her voices. I've only listened to one other book that she voiced but it seems like although she can do different voices for different characters her range for each character is limited. it's like she creates an archetypal voice for that character and runs with it rather than giving the characters any sort of inflection.

the author needs some help too. adding in pop culture references breaks the immersion and is more annoying than anything. I won't say it's a detriment to the story but it definitely didn't help anything. the other thing that I have an issue with it's his use of the word fantasy. we fully understand that this is a fantasy story, the main character sees the world as a fantasy world coming from a world without goblins and other creatures,..... so why is the first fantasy creature he sees calling it a fantasy world despite it being a normal world to him? that just makes no sense and the authors insistence on having characters from that world use the word fantasy as if they think it's a fantasy too is jarring. if you're going to write a story like this where someone goes to a fantasy world you have to look at the perspective of the inhabitants. to them it's not fantasy, it's real. only to people who crossed over would it be considered fantasy cause what's normal to them is different.

the other issue I have, though it's minor, is him making dragons at the low end of the totem pole. it seems like he wants to subvert the norm but without any actual reason to do so. maybe he didn't want to make dragons this all powerful intelligence like you typically see due to eastern influence but then he could have gone the western route. in fact this would have given him the ability to take advantage of a good literary technique, chekovs gun. after mentioning dragons the guy the mc is speaking to at the beginning could have told him they're mindless monsters that live outside the city. this would have set up chekovs gun and he could have had the mc maybe get into an argument with one of the female characters, the female runs out of the city, encounters a dragon, and our mc has to use wit to save her. it would have made a much more satisfying addition rather than just making them below average joes.


my issues with this story are mainly ones you'd never pick up unless you're familiar with writing. if you're just looking for a story to listen to there's absolutely nothing wrong with this book. the vice actress leaves much to be desired but she's not horrible and the characters eventually grow on you. it's just that if you're a writer and you know how to utilize literary techniques you're going to notice the problems this book has. again, it doesn't detriment the story overall, it's just that it could have been better if the author had a better editor who called out some of the weird stuff.

Overall fun listen

I don't like saying negative things about people but the girl reading your stories drove me nuts at times by using The letter d for the letter t in many many examples

It's exactly what you'd expect

We all know why you were looking at this and that's fine, no shame. It's a spicy book about goblins, that's all you need.

sound effects

I really liked the sound effects in the background it made listening so much better!!