Best Friend's Li'l Sis

Brother's Best Friend Series 1

De: Katy Kaylee

Narrado por: Alex Kydd, Elizabeth Russell

Amber

How would I describe myself?

Single mom. Strong as steel. Stupid - because I listen to my heart and not my head.

Logan

This job interview was supposed to get Amber in front of me so I could apologize for hurting her. So I could figure out how to get a second chance to make her mine.

I don't care if she's had kids since us - I've always wanted to be a dad. She's my best friend's li'l sis - we'll figure that out. I've got money - but I can't buy her. I was her first - she was mine. I want her to be my last. Wait...is that even possible?

Contains mature themes.

©2019 Katy Kaylee (P)2020 Tantor

it was good but

the story line was good but the characters were being read in the 3rd person form

HEA

3rd person was fine with me. Narrators were good. Story was good. Ignore the people complaining about the little things.

Loved it!

So cute and adorable. The back and forth was done well. Bradley was so darn adorable. Came together great. It was nice change you actually gave them an actual beginning for the beginning of the story. I was confused for a while if or when he might actually leave and why. Although I am surprised he didn’t try to fight harder instead of just leaving. Still a good read.

Couldn't get past Ch. 5

Sorry but the male performer is just too whiny. Hard to follow. Maybe I'll read it if it is a book.

No... Just No!!! Spoilers....

One of my favorite troupes ruined. Why you ask? Let me share.

1. The narration is awful.

2. Too many sex scenes. The storyline isn't strong enough to support this level of cringe sex.

3. Now let's really get into it. You the author, want me, the reader to like your main female character after she...
▪︎snoops through her boyfriends private journal without just cause. It's not like she thinks he's cheating on her no she is just being nosey.
▪︎Then she doesn’t stop when she realizes it is how he dealt with his parents death and keeps reading.
▪︎Oh and let's not stop there she reads on and refuses to listen to him about something she reads.
▪︎That prompts her to hide a pregnancy and child from him for five years.
▪︎She also lies to her family and noone sees that this child looks just like the man that abruptly leaves nor suspects it is his child until the media gets ahold of it.

No, no, no. We refuse to be that gullible.

The bones of this story wouldn't be enough for a rewrite just scrap the whole thing. This troupe should be written in a way that you are emotionally connected to the characters and you understand why she would keep such a life changing secret. You didn't do that. For those reasons this book is being returned.

Dear fellow readers,
Save your money and pass on this book. You can thank me later.

to quick

I really didn't like the story line. I didn't get far into the story. I only got the read because I absolutely love Alex kydd. I wasn't fond of the female voice.. the story was to quick... no build up.

I really did not like this

To be honest, I was so excited for a really good story, but it’s not. I felt like the storyline is too cliché. It’s not that good. The performance was like average, but the story known was so bad. I did not like it. I do not recommend anybody to listen to this it’s just not that good.

Not the greatest

I love the storyline I love the male narrator But I don't like the 3rd party reading it didn't give it enough it took away