My Secret Portal to a Fantasy World, Book 3

De: D. Levesque

Narrado por: Giancarlo Herrera, Hannah Schooner

Jack's return brings a new challenge: Earth is on the brink of joining the Omniverse Nexus, and it's happening faster than he anticipated. Thanks to Jack's relentless leveling and monster-slaying, the Dungeons for humans of Earth have arrived way ahead of schedule, and now he must delve into their depths with his two lovers, Shana and Bri, and his formidable companion, Onyx the Shadow Leopard.

Their goal is daunting yet enticing: reach level 25, defeat the final Boss by year's end, and claim a mysterious prize promised by the enigmatic Custodian of the Guardians of the Portal. But what exactly is this prize, and why is it something that Jack feels would be a game changer for him and his fellow humans? As Jack and his team plunge into the unknown, they'll face unimaginable challenges, uncover hidden secrets, and test the limits of their abilities in a quest that could change everything.

Join Jack and his companions on an epic journey through the treacherous realms of the new Dungeons, where danger lurks at every turn and victory comes at a steep price.

©2024 D. Levesque (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

it is worth the points

this book was great I should say this series was great I wish it had another book to this series to let us know how they deal with the situation on Earth I hope you enjoy the book as much as I did this series as much as I did enjoy.

Another addition to this amazing series

One this that stands out is the fact that Direwolves exist but are endangered there are a few wolf sanctuary’s that are trying to install a breeding program to bring these magnificent creatures out of endangerment

I love this series

this series keeps getting better. I love the direction the story is heading. plenty of action and humor. the narration is great also!

Story keeps getting better and better

The story keeps getting better and deeper into to the mystery of the worlds and the omniverse, looking forward to seeing where we end up

I need more animal sidekicks.

I am totally loving this series ❣️
But... I would like to see some more awesome animal sidekicks join the harem team.
This series is a wonderful take on the portal HaremLit genre.
If you've been following this series your going to love this episode.
I'm giving this book 8.5 out of 5 stars.

Great book series

Really enjoyed listening to this series. I wish each book would be longer as u will want more.

Book Three is worth buying

Herrera and Schooner do a great job dialects and voice modulation. there is no doubt about who is speaking at any time.
Story gr I was in depth and complexity. I admit and am hooked waiting for number four.

What a fun story

This was a very fun story and despite being the third book in this series has done well to maintain its pace and interesting subject matter

Dull witted and uselessly long inner thoughts

The mc is way too slow witted and has turned into basic john doe with no personality. In one part he pointlessly talks about how he feels bad about humanity but it just sounds like one long wishy washy whiney bull shit that is just hypocritical. He didnt feel bad, he just felt ashamed but kept harping on it and irked me immensely.
I love the slow world building but the mc is written too poorly.
Also really tired of these books being the land of the white.

Too Unbelievable and Poorly Paced

I liked the first two, and I get that this is just a simple guilty pleasure kind of read, but my issues come down to a few things.

If you just want more turn your brain off fun, and maybe you've taken a break between book 2 and 3, stop reading this now and just enjoy the book -- I enjoyed the first half we'll enough before I hit some things that broke my suspension of disbelief and I had to stop the book.

Spoiler warning... though none of these are significant plot points considering they're all in passing.



- Finances - Implied several times that he controls the women's purse strings despite them earning their own gold. They made 2250 gold in one outing, but then he said they felt "lighter in gold" due to spending 500 gold in the same transaction on a piece of armor. the woman then thanks the MC profusely for buying it, despite her share of gold from that single transaction being over 500 gold anyways. And remember that's 500 thousand US dollars.

- Everyone is white. Despite being different races and from different worlds.

- All women are skinny and have huge breasts that never require bras.

- The world of magic still requires exercise to stay fit, even though the food isn't even that tasteful this they don't eat or drink much of it in comparison. All the women coincidentally like to stay fit, and for some reason need to work at it, despite having extremely high charisma. Other body types are never described and evidently not appreciated.

- Relationships go from occasional business transactions to husband and wife in less than a day.

- "Science will stop working". It's literally a process of thinking and reasoning. It's implied the food will still be around, but TVs and Internet and cars and weapons will stop working. As if the scientific method has never helped with ingredient creation or food preparation.

- He has no qualms or concerns about the fact that the world is going to become magical and have all technology stop working. He doesn't seem to care that they have no say in it and acts like it's for the better. That everyone will just adjust to literally no running water, no electricity and no dentistry (can't have toothpaste anymore I'm assuming because chemicals and science - it's literally called our that the magical worlds dont brush their teeth).

- Roughly one billion people die in about 2-3 days due to suicide and murder. Yes that is approximately 12% of the worlds population. the main character doesn't seem to care in the slightest when he's told that, and continues talking to the "demi-god" that is at fault for it. They just seem glad it's not more. Keep in mind resurrection literally exists as a spell in this same book.

- They have sex for hours and hours into the night. They have no schedule, nowhere to be, but they only get 3 hours of sleep. In a modern home. Why did they wake up? Who the heck does that?

- Timeline of the story is extremely accelerated out of the blue. Like from 100 years expected for events to occur to weeks.

- For a harem novel, not a single sex scene is described. They're skipped over like a pg-13 movie. Who is the audience here? Fourth wing is spicier.

- Zero character growth or development other than levels going up. Stats are barely mentioned too, but more importantly no one learns anything at any point.

That said, the narration is incredible. Huge props to the narrators.