[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling

A LitRPG Apocalypse Adventure ([Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling, Book 1)

De: FreeID

Narrado por: Amanda Dolan

There is no weapon more powerful than the [Psychokinetic] mind.

Astrid, a mischievous noble teen, long dreamed of exploring the ancient cities preserved beneath the waves, left behind from a time before the ocean swallowed the world. She's been training all her life to become a magic swordsman capable of doing just that.

But when an ancient monster long thought dead assaults humanity's last bastion–a floating ship-city–she awakens her System early.

Only, she's not a warrior as expected. She's forced to walk the path of a [Psychokinetic] Mage.

With Spawn-infested oceans, pirates looking to plunder, and mysterious monsters that lurk within Bubbled-Cites at the bottom of the ocean, Safety is anything but guaranteed.

She’ll learn levitation, object throwing, eyeball pulling, and more, all the way to the apex of psychic powers.

But, what happens when she discovers that her world was a lot larger than she–and the rest of humanity, once thought?

Don't miss the start of this action-packed and often hilarious LitRPG Apocalypse series about a young survivor with a craving for adventure and fighting. Perfect for fans of Azarinth Healer and Eight.

About the series: Astrid wasn't expecting to awaken as a mage class, but that won't stop her from having fun. In fact, she'll no longer need to resort to laborious activities, including, but not limited to; picking up stuff, carrying stuff, or even throwing stuff. Everything can be done with her mind!

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Love it

Delightful and I loved how fast and action packed this book was. Sometimes a normal pace, other times wild and action packed, never slow.

The pacing feels really off

seems like the author wanted to get right into the meat of the story with the minimum amount of explanation or any depth. the storys pretty good, but I struggled to get through the book

Good fun, annoyingly abrupt ending.

Great book, excellent narration. Wonderful character and world development. The ending nearly ruined the whole book with its abruptness. If it had a better written and more conclusive ending, it would get 4 stars for story.

The pauses ruined it

The story is actually very entertaining. It’s the pauses in narration that drag you out of the story and make it difficult to enjoy the book.

For Young Female Listening

The story isn't very good. The main character is annoying and painful to listen to.

Well, I want more

Very enjoying a story and The world building is interesting

I can’t wait for more

The long pauses are the largest issue

Good first book that left off at a good spot. The MC is OP for her level from day one and her progression is fast. Largest issue with the actual story is the lack of information on how the classes work. Like when the MC reviews her stat screen there is some info that I don't understand and it's never explained. I'm still not sure if that was due to a lack of knowledge within the world or an oversight by the author or what the deal is. It also does not take away from the story in a meaningful way.

The narration was good but not great. There were too many long pauses within a chapter that made things kind of annoying. It's like you think "oh the chapter is ending here?" or " is there going to be a perspective change?" and then the dialogue or internal monologue continues like nothing happened. It's jarring but not enough to ruin the story. A little editing finesse in post would fix this right up. So please do that for book 2!

I'm definitely looking forward to book 2.

LitRPG Waterworld - with Bursting Eyeballs!

The story is overall pretty good, with humanity's bitter struggle for survival being a theme I always enjoy. I wasn't entirely thrilled with the snobbish, entitled princess attitude, but with a bit of a twist in the story with a certain skill, I was utterly thrilled with her more annoying emotional traits. I'm excited about the sequel, and can't wait to see all the new ways the MC uses her telekinesis (psychokinetic) powers.

A good listen!

Found this book through a ad on FB and it’s surprised me it never showed on my list of recommendations on audible.
It is well written and well narrated! It has a cool magic system and a whole world of possibilities.
There is no harem and the stat reads are not over bearing and well timed. Looking forward to the next book!

Rip out their Eyeballs!

This is an Apocalypse LITRPG set in the far future long after the apocalypse started. Humanity has a few small bastions the greatest of which is a gigantic ship. The Mc is a member of the Nobility on said ship and is expected to do her house proud whether that be in combat or in some other way.
Pros:
1. The powers of the MC are Mental in nature granted by a symbiote of sorts, telekinesis mostly.
2. The world building and the dire straights humanity are in make a compelling narrative.
3. The MC is really likeable and her powers are heavily influenced by her emotions leading to some great cathartic scenes.
4. Kaiju's seem to be the main obstacles in the long arc of the story.
Cons
1 The MC goes through too many training arcs/trials that get in the way of the plot or are not spaced out well.
2. There aren't any standout side characters besides the MC's sister that fulfills a totally different role in the family.