Harmony

Harmony, Book 1

By: Alan Moria

Narrated by: Jack Smith, Anne Marie Lebeaur

Throughout his entire life, Nate has been considered a cripple and an inconvenience, solely for being born without the precious magic for which the Great Arcane Families were both respected and feared. Being powerless as he was, he couldn’t fight back when choosing to do the right thing was rewarded with even more injustice from old men on even older thrones.

Having lost the name and support of his Great Family, Nate was forced to live as an outcast, though still unable to truly escape the shadows that the Magnus family cast over him. However, this was about to change.

As time passed and children grew up, the future brought changes and opportunities. Finally given the chance he yearned for so long, Nate found himself facing a new world—a world filled with adventures, dangers, and opportunities in equal measure. A world that would finally give Nate the chance to be whom he had always aspired to be, where he could truly be free, and where his efforts would be appropriately rewarded. A world where he could find the place where he belonged.

And perhaps, a world where old thrones could burn.

©2024 Alan Moria (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Good story, Needs some editing.

Really liked the story, it drew me in instantly; though admittedly it did slow down a bit towards the end.

The frequency of editing errors detracted a bit from my overall enjoyment of the story.

Names are sometimes switched in conversations, female characters are sometimes called “he”, and there also occasional small contradictions… nothing too major but it was definitely noticeable.

I’d still recommend giving it a shot, definitely one of the better entries in the genre. Looking forward to book 2!

Solid Story

I liked the overall story, the world, and characters.

Narration forcthe MC felt a little inconsistent at throughout some of the story. Maybe it was an audio mixing issue, but overall both narrators did a solid job.

My main gripe was the last 4 hours, as I felt the pacing was excellent up till that moment. Then it suddenly slows down hard for what amounted to a filler arc that could have resolved itself at any point. The filler not being resolved untill the end had the added effect of causing the ending to leave a weak impression on me as well. It's just a shame, because the writing felt a lot more focused up till that point.

However, I still think overall it was a good book, and I still recommend the story. I look forward to a second book.

This was fun

This book was fun. I enjoyed the good natured adventure and the camaraderie was refreshing

Werewolves and other planets.

What do you do when you're born without powers in a magical world?
You get them by any means necessary.
Magic, faeries, werewolves, vampires, other planets and dungeons, what more do you want?
A bit of spicy action to heat things up?
You got it!
This book has it all.
And I can't wait for book 2 where I'm sure there's more to come.
I'm giving this book 8.5 out of 5 stars.

now that's what I'm talking about

yo when I first saw this book I was expecting a regular romance and hot girl book, well there is nothing regular about this book it is very much extraordinary love to narration and you are going to love the story I like how they are so badass and unapologetic can't wait for next book

Fantastic!

I really enjoyed this and cannot wait for three next one. Brings a more unique perspective to dungeon cores.

Complex MC and great supporting cast

I really enjoyed the story as it had deep backgrounds along with Pleasant twists. The narration was fantastic and the story moved had a very good pace.

great mix of harem and adventure

Great story if you like harem and mc working his way to power. Can't wait for book 2 and beyond!

I loved it

genuinely, my only complaint is that I don't have four or five more of his books to listen to.

More please

Love the premise of this book. Still a lot of holes and gaps that need to be covered about the protagonist and his history to help the reader understand how he thinks. (so far the guy is kind of an ass) Also, his history with the other characters leave a lot of unanswered questions. Need more character development with the wolfpack alpha. Dungeon battles appear long and drawn out. Only basic information was provided about what the protagonist did for the 10 years after he met the Fae and the portal opening.