Forging Magic : Heroes of Niafell

A Cozy LitRPG

De: William Lbeyne

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

In the heart of Niafell, in the Kingdom of Valyria the kingdom of legend and lore, there exists a forge run by Thane Ironfist, a dwarf blacksmith known far and wide for his unrivaled skill. His fiery domain is a canvas for his artistry, each stroke of his hammer echoing through the city, mirroring the pulse of Valyria itself.

Yet, in this bastion of dwarven tradition, the keen eye will spot an anomaly - Lyra Frostwhisper, a young Snow Elf. Under the grizzled Thane's tutelage, she hones her craft, her determination lighting up the forge brighter than any flame. Together, they shape not just metal, but stories of hope, healing, and harmony.

The patrons they serve are as diverse as the artifacts they mend. From the warrior of Tharion seeking to reignite the magic within his ancestral sword, to the noble of Valyria, hoping to awaken the dragonbone dagger's latent power, each item that enters the forge holds a story waiting to be told.

decent

at first I thought, wonderful, a magical blacksmith Story where they actually focus on the craft instead of it being a footnote in the story. But every time they were working on a piece it kept describing how she realized that it wasn't just a piece they were working on but a part of history and how they were it's keeper. it was fine the first four times it happened but man this was every five minutes or so. im pretty sure it took up most of the book. The virtual voice was ok i guess. it kept pronouncing bow as in bow of the ship instead of bow and arrow context. but I think subconsciously my brain new it was an artificial voice because I just couldn't focus on it for long. it was monotone and really droned sometimes.
a redeaming quality though was the pieces the blacksmiths were working on. they were creative and interesting especially the last job but maybe instead of saying over and over how they realize that they are the preservers and custodians of history through their work, take some time and describe a story of the person who wielded said weapon. not a bad book but I hope the next one will but much better composed

Neat idea bad execution, so maybe.

I could see really enjoying about crafting but this did not enough details to make it interesting. If this was trying to be a Litrpg book it failed bad because no details about skills , abilities or even magic. We got information like they used thier magic to make iteams. Nothing about process or magic just they used it. I read a lot of books and this was not enough for me.