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Enjoyable story FAR too short

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Reviewed: 07-06-24

Enjoyable. I wish other writers would take notes on writing lit rpg from books like these. Thankfully, you won't hear the characters sheet a zillion times or endless repetition of ability descriptions like HWFWM. This was a pleasant story of a unnerving adult trapped in a child's body. would recommend. Kind of expensive for how short.

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Good fantasy

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4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 03-31-24

I liked the concept of Travelers. I liked the magic and main character. The deep flaws in all the characters and misunderstandings. Quite fun.
The one thing I didn't like was how the main character is dumped on all the time and when others are in the same situation it's easy for them to get power with the explanation "sorry MC we don't like poor people and the talentless, we helped these other characters no problem when we offer you only scorn"
I would recommend.

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Could not finish this tale of a serial child killer.

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Reviewed: 03-31-24

Suffered through the first half in hopes that this book would become more fantastical but really feels like all theages and mystics are just people with knowledge and that scares the people wrapped up in keeping up social appearance and doing things they don't want to keep up their social standing. The main character goes from regretful killer who bragged when he was young, and now a fat family annihilator who personally kills babies and distributes slaves to keep his contacts happy in the name of religion.
It can be hard to tell who is talking based on the narrator.

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If Harry Potter had Naruto's demon

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Reviewed: 03-14-24

I really enjoyed this book! the volume levels need a bit of balancing when characters are shouting.

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Interesting take but I can remember the stats

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Reviewed: 11-14-23

I liked the story overall and I am glad for the description from both the human and wolf point of views. Narrator did great.
the only gripe I have with 85% of litrpg is the repetition of stats so frequently and even among assignment of said stats. Either the narrator needs to craft what would be skim-able in text to some better in speech or I hope the next book changes the representation of stats.

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A fun story

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Reviewed: 09-22-23

The ending was good. At the last hour mark I was half expecting a second book that I would have really enjoyed. Alas, this is a complete book; excellent in it's own right.
Will does a good job narrating.

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This was great

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Reviewed: 08-28-23

A inventive way to show a different side of the online game vs AI plight. I really enjoyed this book and it was worth the cash.

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This was good!

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Reviewed: 07-31-23

It was a little repetitious with the notifications but not as bad as others. The story is good and the MC is well balanced.
My only real complaint is sometimes the audio level drops or raises.
I will be getting book 2.

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Some fun action and twists but...

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Reviewed: 06-28-23

painful to get through. At one point there was an hour and fifteen minute pointless argument. Every conversation felt like a recap for the character who just came on scene. Very fusterating.
Narrator did a good job but the shouting needs level balace. Eardrum destroyer if you wear earbuds.

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I wish I hadn't started this series.

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Reviewed: 06-22-23

I liked the first book but since then there is so much repetion and agonizing over choices. Litterally agonizing, complete with character internal pain. It is exhausting after the 4th hour long conversation on the same subject with a MC that the world happens to. MC is under constant emotional torture.

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