The Luna’s True Mate

De: Tiffany Keller

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Ophelia James has been tormented her entire life because she had no wolf. On her 18th birthday, she searches for her fated mate but when she finds out who he is, she immediately wants nothing to do with him. But he rejects her first. And then tries to kill her.

Afterwards, she meets Jordan. Alpha of the Black River Pack.

Will Ophelia get a second chance with her new mate? Will he become her true mate? And what will happen with her first mate that rejected her? Read and find out.

Horrible narrator

Good story. Narrator was just awful. It was hard to follow at times. Maybe if they re record it it’ll be better.

Taking control of ones life and future.

I would have like her to torture him a little. but other than that I loved the story.

More of an Outline than a Story. No Development.

The story is incredibly short and has no development of the main characters. It was like listening to an idea for a book that doesn't have the meet in it yet.

Quick story

If you're looking for a quick read or listen to, this is a good one. The story squishes a lot in a smaller story.

With a few teaks this short story could have been Great

I like the storyline and in the telling understand why it’s a short story there are mis opportunities for richer characters and while I like sex scenes in my stories, this comes across as though it’s been written by someone who has never been made love to or by someone but not all of us have had good experiences with sex or sex with love not judging just a observation. I would be interested in reading some of this authors more in depth work because I like stories that are interesting and straight forward so I will definitely be browsing this author

Good Potential

I'd say if you treat it like a a light read and more of a wattpad story you'll enjoy it.
The story needs a little work, ultimately there were a few glaring plot holes and lore that contradicted itself but the plot itself had the potential to be interesting. The characters growth kind of felt a little rushed and squeezed into the end and the sex scenes also seemed a little rushed and awkward.

good detail and atory

bravo on being an independent publisher. great short story. looking forward to the followup books in the series.

GREAT BEGINNING

This is my first time listening to a virtual voice but I have to say I have listened to some insufferable narrators that were worse. I liked the story but I wish it was longer because there were so many things that could have been fleshed out giving more drama. That said it was not bad.

Good storyline but the AI voice did it. no justice

This was a very good book. nice storyline very enthralling and thrilling. the only thing that lacked for this book was the AI voice that was used to narrate. because of the content of the book, The AI voice did not do it justice. it really should have been done in a human voice to really emphasize a lot of the content in this book.

Story too short!

This virtual narrator was horrible. The storyline was good but it needed to be expanded.