Sabotaged Christmas

De: Carole Brown

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Toni DeLuca, the Italian owner of DeLuca Construction, finds herself confronted with doubts about her father and his possible deceptions—all because of the mysterious pink notes she’s been receiving. Relations with Perrin Douglas who has a troubled history—but the first man in years who’s interested her—is building to a peak. Yet Perrin‘s own personal problems and his doubts about women and God, keep getting in the way. Gossip, a Spanish proposal, an inheritance, and a sabotaged construction business may ruin Christmas for Toni’s employees as well as her own happiness. Will a mysterious person succeed in pulling off the biggest scam Appleton, West Virginia has ever seen? And will this culprit destroy Toni's last chance at happiness with the man of her dreams?

Great start

The story had potential, but the second half felt rushed. While the narrative bobbed back and forth between the main characters, which was fine, the perspective character wasn't always identified at the beginning of the section.

The timing became confusing. what seemed to be important events were barely mentioned. Things that didn't move the story forward were large sections.

The dialogue needed more identifiers throughout, especially with more that 2 characters talking. Also, the resolution to different problems was really short and confusing.