Return of the Legendary Lord Omnibus: Books 1-3

De: Marcus Sloss, Seth Pike

Narrado por: Christopher Harbour, Mandy McCullough

One great series in a single offering!

Base Building, Babes, and Battles!

Join the Legendary Lord as he is reborn again, this time to fight an evil God that's threatening the existence of his very land. But first he has to build his stronghold, battle monsters and get to know the beautiful Elven queen Leyathel, among others if get to know means what you think it means…

However, there's a slight problem. He has no idea who he is, why he was reborn, or what he’s supposed to do. Mere trifling details that won’t stop a Legendary Lord even if it takes him a little bit to get settled into his new environment!

This is a 4x LitRPG Harem book with: Levels, War, and a Quest for Domination!

©2023 Marcus Sloss and Seth Pike (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

Surprisingly awesome.

I figured this would be a good series. I just didn't expect it to be this good.
The Legendary Lord is restarting his life with no memories and at level 0. He has to build up his kingdom and his harem from scratch.
He is planning on bringing all the races together in peace with all the human kingdoms against the plan.
Great writing and narration.
I give this book and series 8 out of 5 stars.

Did not grab my attention.

Any good story grabs the attention of the reader. However in this case, after several chapters, I could careless about MC, his unexplained motivations and the lack of world building.

Needed More Time To Develop

Three books weren’t enough to really expand on the main character. *Spoiler* Character development was good for the first three wives, but fell short when the last ones were introduced. While I was invested in the first three, the rest didn’t have enough time to build their character.

Main character needed more depth. Some of his dialogues were too blunt or stiff instead of organic natural. There were definitely some cringe moments where the dialogue fell short and took himself too seriously.

Overall this needed to be 4 or 5 books long to better develop the remaining wives so the readers would be more invested. The main character needed more background and personality.

The story was decent, but the lack of character development that the writer is wanting us to like some of the main characters and be invested in was hurting the story being told.

It was...okay.

It started out well and set up a lot of potential. Each wife could have been her own book. But then it changed and it felt speed up. Maybe not rushed but just quickened. Lots of barrowed ides from WoT and LOTR. The male reader was okay, a little flat but fine. The female reader, she was always flat.
The use of modern vocabulary was jarring and pulled me out of the reading when used.
In all, it was okay.

Wake up confused but motivated

the MC wakes up and has no past memory. He has a high motivation drive to succeed in life. the story is fast pace and fun to listen to. long story for one credit. great value. Not for kids.

fantastic listen

a great book. great plot and lots of action with some spice. kingdom building at its finest and 3 books for a single credit

lots of twists

slow hard to get the story but then it came together have patience it's worth the wait

wasn't for me

felt it was shallow with a rushed ending. would have returned it if it was an option on the app

fun for what it is

it certainly isn't the highest peak of writing but it's serviceable for what it is. although the VA doesn't get into character until like book 2. the wizard hero is a great character

Really neat series.

character and world development was really well done. I loved the twists and turns of this series, even though at times it was predictable, there were a lot of moments that I never saw coming. The story flowed along perfectly to keep me wanting to listen, right up until the end. Nicely done.