EMP:The Fall

A Post Apocalyptic Survival Story

De: Mark Mathews

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Ridiculed by his peers and family, Garret Witmer fights to prove his theory to be true. Armed with a military background and skills to survive in the post-apocalyptic world, Garrett has no idea that what he’s about to face will be much more devastating than he anticipated. As tensions rise among people, disaster is not only imminent but inevitable. Will Garrett be able to convince his friends and family to trust his instincts and follow his lead before lives are lost? Can he keep his doubting family safe from harm? Find out in this action-packed post-apocalyptic thrill ride!

Good story

 If you’re going to use a virtual voice program, you may need to write a script just for that for instance, instead of saying EMP you may need to say E M P also if you’re going to use a gun caliber of 45 do not put a period in front of it cause it will say .45

stilted speaking. no inflection or emotion.

story wasn't bad. But the voice not being part of the story with nuances and warmth it detracted from the overall tale.

Moved at a nice pace.

Not very realistic, but not a bad story. This was way too short, should have continued with several more chapters.

Surprisingly good

I haven’t been a fan of the Virtual Voice narration in the last few months, but it seems to be getting better. This one doesn’t sound as robotic as the ones I listened to a few months ago.
Story is fairly good, Look forward to the next one, which I hope is in the correct order, I can’t tell yet. I enjoy listening while I bake and cook (and count while I crochet lol)

Story line holes

The story has holes and jumps, where it seems things are supposed to be mentioned but then they aren’t. Also the characters decisions do not always align with their portrayal or reality of typical people behave, and so the actions mismatch, and ultimately it ends up with a book that needs significant editing. The storyline has a strong foundation if the writing can be cleaned up.

one of the worst books I've listened to

the main character is neurotic and controlling. Who wants to be the hero, but fails at every turn. he keeps saying he wants to save and protect his family. yet fails to do a damn thing. other than stock up on canned goods to protect anybody. when he should act he doesn't. when he shouldn't act he does and always does the wrong thing. the series should be titled how to die in the first month of the apocalypse

Truly Awful

The characters were a mess of catty, whiny, and weak willed, completely annoying caricatures of people. There was not a sympathetic character in the bunch, and I wanted to shake some sense into the main character every single moment, let alone every chapter. I got this book as part of my membership, and I'm STILL upset at how bad it was. The narrator was very dry and lended nothing to the already poor story. My high school English students have written better, and I want my time back.

No ending?!?!

Good story until they tell you
that you have to visit a website to see how the story ends!!!!

Not worth the listen.

All is very very very bad and worse than most books so bad bad bad worse than bad

100% AI...

The narration by AI is pretty weak. Even worse, I think the story was written by chat gpt. Not very good. Do not recommend.