Mark

nooooooo

Revisado: 01-13-25

a male voice doesn't work for female characters. the stories are good. I can't deal with the male voice. I don't care about dei.

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stratosphere

Revisado: 02-18-24

This book began girl boss and her brownie baking boyfriend... I couldn't wait to tear it up in review... then all of sudden the booster rockets fired and the story blew through the stratosphere... this team hit it out of the park. The cast, the sound effects... everything is on point. This story has unlimited potential and can be an epic classic as it comes off the press. Too many books have fallen to the mob. Hopefully these people will hold the line and not bend the knee. My fingers are crossed and I look forward to the next 20 installments.

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fast paced

Revisado: 01-04-24

I don't know how I found this? It is a refreshing relief from all the new books preaching the woke religion. I need more like it. It ended too quickly for me... I can't think of anything to say that won't be a spoiler. good story teller. I like stories like damphir by Hendee. Anything Orson Scott card does. good luck.

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epic failure some real author please mentor sloan

Revisado: 08-27-21

There is so much wrong with this series. I'd hate to spend more time writing a review than the author spent writing content... spoiled rotten manly princess of a main character the universe owes. 1 clique after the other. free woke BS. Someone should have proof read this series before going to publication. Men are the weaker sex, women shouldn't show emotion even though there's nothing wrong with emotions. non sex creatures are the best. "the seer saw?" The author stacked the universe in favor of the main character. Weak character development... I'm not saying writing is easy. I'm saying leave it to the professionals IE the ones who take it seriously. Just because you get paid to write doesn't make you a professional. I feel as if I was proof reading a document PhDs would red marker every sentence. nothing sat right with this whole production make the author redo it. good thing it was free. what can be said? it's not for grown-ups? why would you expose kids to crap writing. and the preteen preaching to the universe about modesty? this feels like woke gender type indoctrination? there are 100s of great authors out there. I'm going to carve the name Justin sloan in the dash of my truck and into my stainless steel refrigerator and bathroom mirror so I don't forget and accidentally get another one of his books. watch the series Gotham and you'll see women that are "badass" because they are. watch the series super girl and you'll see women who are bad ass because they say they are and then need a man to save them. you'll see the difference I'm talking about. this series is pandering to someone I don't know who. the narrator did the best they could, but needs to stick to fewer than 3 characters. it gets tough separating who's who in the overall grand scheme of things.

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publisher failed... everyone failed this author

Revisado: 08-27-21

There is so much wrong with this series. I'd hate to spend more time writing a review than the author spent writing content... spoiled rotten manly princess of a main character the universe owes. 1 clique after the other. free woke BS. Someone should have proof read this series before going to publication. Men are the weaker sex, women shouldn't show emotion even though there's nothing wrong with emotions. non sex creatures are the best. "the seer saw?" The author stacked the universe in favor of the main character. Weak character development... I'm not saying writing is easy. I'm saying leave it to the professionals IE the ones who take it seriously. Just because you get paid to write doesn't make you a professional. I feel as if I was proof reading a document PhDs would red marker every sentence. nothing sat right with this whole production make the author redo it. good thing it was free. what can be said? it's not for grown-ups? why would you expose kids to crap writing. and the preteen preaching to the universe about modesty? this feels like woke gender type indoctrination? there are 100s of great authors out there. I'm going to carve the name Justin sloan in the dash of my truck and into my stainless steel refrigerator and bathroom mirror so I don't forget and accidentally get another one of his books. watch the series Gotham and you'll see women that are "badass" because they are. watch the series super girl and you'll see women who are bad ass because they say they are and then need a man to save them. you'll see the difference I'm talking about. this series is pandering to someone I don't know who. the narrator did the best they could, but needs to stick to fewer than 3 characters. it gets tough separating who's who in the overall grand scheme of things.

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everyone failed this author (tell him the truth)

Revisado: 08-27-21

There is so much wrong with this series. I'd hate to spend more time writing a review than the author spent writing content... spoiled rotten manly princess of a main character the universe owes. 1 clique after the other. free woke BS. Someone should have proof read this series before going to publication. Men are the weaker sex, women shouldn't show emotion even though there's nothing wrong with emotions. non sex creatures are the best. "the seer saw?" The author stacked the universe in favor of the main character. Weak character development... I'm not saying writing is easy. I'm saying leave it to the professionals IE the ones who take it seriously. Just because you get paid to write doesn't make you a professional. I feel as if I was proof reading a document PhDs would red marker every sentence. nothing sat right with this whole production make the author redo it. good thing it was free. what can be said? it's not for grown-ups? why would you expose kids to crap writing. and the preteen preaching to the universe about modesty? this feels like woke gender type indoctrination? there are 100s of great authors out there. I'm going to carve the name Justin sloan in the dash of my truck and into my stainless steel refrigerator and bathroom mirror so I don't forget and accidentally get another one of his books. watch the series Gotham and you'll see women that are "badass" because they are. watch the series super girl and you'll see women who are bad ass because they say they are and then need a man to save them. you'll see the difference I'm talking about. this series is pandering to someone I don't know who. the narrator did the best they could, but needs to stick to fewer than 3 characters. it gets tough separating who's who in the overall grand scheme of things.

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everyone failed this author

Revisado: 08-27-21

There is so much wrong with this series. I'd hate to spend more time writing a review than the author spent writing content... spoiled rotten manly princess of a main character the universe owes. 1 clique after the other. free woke BS. Someone should have proof read this series before going to publication. Men are the weaker sex, women shouldn't show emotion even though there's nothing wrong with emotions. non sex creatures are the best. "the seer saw?" The author stacked the universe in favor of the main character. Weak character development... I'm not saying writing is easy. I'm saying leave it to the professionals IE the ones who take it seriously. Just because you get paid to write doesn't make you a professional. I feel as if I was proof reading a document PhDs would red marker every sentence. nothing sat right with this whole production make the author redo it. good thing it was free. what can be said? it's not for grown-ups? why would you expose kids to crap writing. and the preteen preaching to the universe about modesty? this feels like woke gender type indoctrination? there are 100s of great authors out there. I'm going to carve the name Justin sloan in the dash of my truck and into my stainless steel refrigerator and bathroom mirror so I don't forget and accidentally get another one of his books. watch the series Gotham and you'll see women that are "badass" because they are. watch the series super girl and you'll see women who are bad ass because they say they are and then need a man to save them. you'll see the difference I'm talking about. this series is pandering to someone I don't know who. the narrator did the best they could, but needs to stick to fewer than 3 characters. it gets tough separating who's who in the overall grand scheme of things.

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this is what I'm looking for...

Revisado: 03-04-20

This is the perfect story and adventure that I'm looking for in today's literature. I don't need a politically correct children's story beating me over the head with an agenda. thanks to all involved. narrator is good, but a full cast production is better. I'm looking for the next installment. thanks again to everyone who made this possible.

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I own this book on paper and digital, now audible

Revisado: 09-06-19

I'm insane and read all Orson Scott Card's books (I'm sure I'm not even close) I recommend all of them. I'm sure if he did a crossword on the toilet while taking a dump, I'd read that. good luck

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master craftsman

Revisado: 05-27-19

This is what a story should be. My first Brent Weeks book. I'm glad I got it.

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