
Arcane Dropout 4
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Narrated by:
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Alex Ford
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By:
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Edmund Hughes
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Eldon Brock goes about his normal life feeling as though a word, or perhaps a name, is on the tip of his tongue. When a hallucination claiming to be a ghost who knows "who he really is" begins stalking him, he's left with an interesting question. Has he lost his mind, or just begun to find it?
Warning: This novel contains graphic sex scenes between the main character and numerous women/succubi/monster girls.
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again my biggest problem is lee and his sister I wanted them to have time to be together more they never feel real she nags on him some but they never get the alone time to just talk to laugh or see how they actually were as siblings. honestly I kinda feel like zoey doesnt even care that much about lee like she loves him but never wants to give up for him and never even offers so I just feel so uncaring about the whole thing.
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More story to go glad for book 5
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As always a blast this series
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See you in the next one.
These books just keep me sucked in.
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nice continuation
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getting tired of the MC
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Agatha Deathfinger! lmfao!
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a fun book
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cant wait
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So first full disclosure, I didn't like dark impulses, his previous series, to the point I returned it. This book reveals, though it was hinted at in the first book and probably more so if I had managed to get through the second book of dark impulse, that the two series exist in the same world and this book is a bit of a cross over. This does color my impression of this book; especially since because of that I cannot get myself through the last 3 hours, I will edit my review after I manage that some how.
So the good: 1. The book does not spend overly much time on the amnesia side journey to get the mc and Tess out into the wider world. Maybe the first two hours.
2. There is a bit of world building here, not a lot, but more than what I was expecting and does a good job of fleshing things out.
3. The mc's down to one girl which works better as it makes it feel a little bit more genuine, especially since its pretty clear up to an including this point Tess is his one and only given how she's in almost every scene and gets a say, and typically the final say, over what happens.
4. Yeah it's a cross over, I didn't like dark impulse but if you wanted to know what happened to Jack and his group afterwards here ya go.
5. I want to make this clear, Mr. Hughes writing is solid, he doesn't tel and not show overly much, he doesn't get lost in exposition, he doesn't have characters suddenly take a 180 for the sake of plot, there are no egregious grammar mistakes, nor does he forget how his magic system works, nor are there dues ex machina used because he wrote himself into a corner, hell he even typically good job of describing the area the characters are in though he could o a bit of a better job there.
6. he uses a soft magic system, that while soft is still well suited and is such due to the number of different extra human beings in the world, something that makes sense to me, and he does so well.
The Cons; now for those down votes.
1. First and foremost the MC is a limp noodle, he more or less goes along with the flow and very rarely thinks ahead and thus ends up in situations and problems that he probably wouldn't have if he had a little more forethought. I personally prefer Mc's with a bit of personally agency and intellect.
2. The book suffers from what a lot of cross over books do, that the previous group kind over shadows and overwhelms the current series's group, especially since there's only the two of them.
3. Here's the biggest weakness since it's what the plot hinges on; we a lot "the government is evil" talk, people say it all the time, but they never show their government being deliberately cruel or evil. In fact from what I have seen in this series is that the government does everything in its power as lightly as possible. This is especially true given that if the magic users didn't have control of their power and not moral they could easily destroy dozens of lives if not more. Mean with people that can brainwash others, delete memories, become invisible, summon fire and the like the amount of havoc they could raise, from slave rings, to arson, to cheating on tests or getting away with literal murder. I get why the magic user's government is so strict; now if we want to lean into then the author should have shown us the government being oppressive and evil, but really its those self same groups that want freedom from the government that act badly. Hell the MC even gets raped and tortured back in book one, but these anti government people are supposed to be the good guys? Of course but they killed a character from Dark Impulse, yeah I never liked that character as they were rather self righteous and short sighted so yes this is what breaks the series for me. Don't write a new series that is completely dependent on the previous series for the plot to work.
In general, this is not a bad book, just an average one. I personally would save my money and go read other series like those by William D Arrand/Randi Darren, Jaeger Mitchells. Harmon Cooper, or Cebelius.
Time to get some dislikes
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