Revelation: A LitRPG Adventure

Salvos, Book 10

De: V.A. Lewis

Narrado por: Tess Irondale

The Netherworld.

It is a hellish landscape inhabited only by Demons: creatures born from the dark abyss. But it is also the home of Salvos, and she is finally back. It is no different than she remembered it. A terrible place where only the strongest survive.

Can she navigate through Revelation and find her first companion? Or will she get lost in the secrets her father has been hiding?

©2023 MelasD / V.A. Lewis (P)2024 Podium Audio

what im the harck

As happy as I am to see Heik again, the book just isn't quite scratching that Salvos itch. I'll hold out for book 11 since I'm this far in, but this book has so far been one of the lower ones in the series ao far. I do like the references to some of your other books in the beginning though.

Another great addition

Felt a little like a filler book but still great. Just short so not too much actually happened

I love the series. It's one of those books that you hope never ends.

The narration is great, story is great. I've listened to all of the books and I come back sometimes for more.

REVEIW FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE WORRIED ABOUT BAD REVEIW

this book is good but has no stakes besides for not dying and just sets up for the next book. it feels like only a little happened but its world building of the nether world and the devils past in this book was cool just don't expect the same thing from this book that the others gave this one almost feels like filler but gets better towards the end.

the only time it repeats itself is the for most of the first chapter and one character is weird for like a chapter.

Salvos parts were great

Personally, I just don't care for much of the story that isn't Salvos. This book spent more time on Heik than others so I wasn't thrilled about that. Still, some good groundwork was laid for the next book.

why does everyone forgot everything, constantly.

it happens alot throughout the series but seems to be getting worse. characters will suddenly forget what's going on and have to spend 15 minutes trying to remember only for them to do it all over again in the next chapter. They will also constantly say the same thing over and over in slightly different ways.

These small annoyances are easy to overlook in the earlier books but now they seem to take up half the story. I think I'm done with this series.

So little happened.

This was just a very disappointing lul in the story. I feel this whole "book" could've been summed up in 2-3 chapters in a better installment in the series. The VA did a great performance as always though.

what the he'll was that

sudden extreme drop in the quality of the writing it constantly repeats itself and is it just me or is Salvos way stupider than normal. The book is also short and expensive the book also just suddenly cuts off it feels like they just cut the book into two so they could sell another book later. This book fells lazy and greedy I might be done with this auther.

good, but the writing ia getting repetitive

Overall good, but there is one small thing that has begun to grate on me: the author has been getting a little too hung up on a few specific words and phrases. Terms like "tried to work my jaw," and "in an instant" appear multiple times per chapter. At least they've stopped saying "sussuration" every two pages.

Where is the rest of the book?

So this series' books are all over the place in length, but this one is not only the shortest yet. Additionally, it feels like it is cut off mid sentence. I thought I had an error in my download until the credits started playing. This series has always had editing issues. Literally, copy pasted from the web series with no changes to account for either book or audio book formats. The last paragraph of a chapter is often the first of the next and entire sections of Salvos' status are repeated in the same paragraph.

The story continues and is enjoyable, but the audiobooks seem to be cut short to sell more volumes. It is sad to see. I will continue reading, but this ends my time listening to this series. A great series, just no one put in the effort to translate it beyond its original web based format.