Protecting Jonah

Shattered Pack, Book 1

By: Fel Fern

Narrated by: Thomas Hart

A shattered pack. One lost alpha. One troubled omega. Unexpected mates?

Grayson Mills needs a fresh start. He returns to his hometown to keep his pack together, but four violent alphas can’t form a stable pack. When an omega baker accidentally runs Grayson over with his bike, his life takes a complete 360-degree turn.

Jonah’s spirited and sweet. He’s good for the likes of Grayson. But Grayson knows if he doesn’t pursue Jonah, he’ll regret it for the rest of his life. Jonah Raine isn’t ready to start a new relationship. He only wants to keep his bakery afloat.

Desperate measures pressured him to borrow money from a notorious loan shark alpha. But now, he’s knee-deep in trouble. He can’t drag Grayson and his pack into his mess, but the stubborn alpha refuses to leave him alone.

Jonah doesn’t believe in true mates, but Grayson’s determined to change his mind.

A struggling omega baker meets his grumpy alpha in Protecting Jonah, a full-length mm mpreg shifter romance. There are no cliff-hangers or cheating, and a HEA is guaranteed.

©2020 Fel Fern (P)2021 Fel Fern

Interesting story

An interesting story, likeable characters.
The story opens with Jonah, who owns a bakery. He's struggling to keep his business and has funds from a loan shark. He literally runs into Grayson, an Alpha who has moved to the area for a fresh start and a new pack. This is a good story with hurt/comfort, instalove, a bit of menace, drama, heat and sweetness. There were a few inconsistencies, but not enough to pull mr from the story.
Thomas Hart is new to me. I enjoyed his voice characterizations, but there were some blips like using the wrong name for a character.
Overall, it was an enjoyable story.

I requested a copy from Audioboom. This review is voluntary and free from bias.

very good

Loved it !! this story. the narrator is so fantastic it's like your really there!! good overall

Good start to a series

Jonah and Grayson make a great couple. This was a cute, sweet, and easy listen. I hope the other books come out in audio soon so that I can find out what happens to the other pack members.

I was given this audio book free at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

Pretty Good

If you like shifters you’ll like this one. Good chemistry with the MCs and the supporting characters. Narrator does a pretty good job.

Protecting Jonah

This is a fast-paced story that has Jonah and Grayson falling for each other rather quickly. I enjoyed meeting Grayson and the other alphas from his pack but was not really fond of the omegas Jonah or Alan. As Jonah and Grayson’s relationship moves along, we also get glimpses of the other characters and their personalities. While this is an interesting start to the shattered pack series, I would have liked a bit more depth to the characters and the story. Narrator Thomas Hart does a nice job of bringing these characters and their world to life. I was given this audiobook in exchange for an honest review.

Awesome

Great book, kept my attention all the way to the end, amazing audio delivery, loved it. Will be reading again, every chapter was received amazingly do recommend you give it a read.

Decent storyline

The story started out as just OK and got a little better after the halfway mark. I felt it hard to connect with Grayson and Jonah at times. I didn’t really feel their connection at the beginning either. I did like the secondary characters and can’t wait to hear/read their stories.

I enjoyed the narrator, but I wish he would have made the voices of each character a little more distinctive. A few times I had a hard time telling who was talking when it was more than two people in a scene.

I have to mention either the book or the narrator had some issues with using the wrong words and weird phrases. It wasn’t just once and at first, I thought I heard wrong so I had to stop the audio and re-listen.

A pretty good start to a new series

3.5 stars

I enjoyed the story & liked the characters. What I had issues with is the repetitiveness of the internalization. Also, the narrator called Jonah, Jason a couple of times. And then when Jonah went into labor & was at the hospital/clinic after being checked in, what should have been said was "his labor flew by" , but it was referred to his "pregnancy flew by". Also, Grayson stated that he would see him in the delivery room & then when he walks in after Jonah has given birth, Jonah tells him to come meet your son, well weren't you in the delivery room? And when Grayson is feeding the baby, he refers to the "bottle" as "milk" instead of "bottle". So it could be just an American thing. Again, I enjoyed the story. Jonah is struggling to get his bakery off the ground after his Alpha abandons him. He also talked Jonah into taking out a loan from a loan shark & is struggling to keep up with the payments. On the way to a delivery, Jonah literally runs into Grayson with his bicycle. Grayson has been burned before, and he doesn't trust Jonah, or any Omega. Jonah doesn't trust Grayson, or any Alpha. We also see Jonah and the other Alpha's who left their prior pack, struggle as a new pack. We get to watch these two break down walls, learn to trust again and really heal each other. Even though I had issues with some things, I will be continuing on with this series.

I rec'd a copy of the audio from Audiobook Boom and this is my honest review.

Very good

I enjoyed this story from start to finish. you have Jonah an omega who's alpha left him and you have Grayson who's omega left him. both are heartbroken from having been left by the ones they loved. But when true love hits you with a bike and you find your true mate, nothing will keep you apart.

Thomas Hart does a very good job with his narration.

I was provided a free copy of this audible and I'm happy to leave my honest review.