Motel of the Black-Eyed Children

By: R. Harrell

Narrated by: Kelly Wilkinson

How far will a demon go to torture someone?

That's what I'm thinking as I peer through the peephole of this cheap motel out into the empty hall as childish giggles come from the other side.

They're taunting me...begging me to open the door. To let them in. But then what? Will they kill me or will they finally go away?

I make the mistake of checking the hall to see if they'd left. It's too late now.... I've let them inside.

Unbeknownst to me, my night of hell has just begun.

©2023 Eve S Evans (P)2023 Eve S Evans

Motel of black eyed children

It was good,but could have been better. I had a hard time with the narration. Misread words really bother me.A corpse and a copse are not the same thing. I think a different narrator would have made it better.The sample story was good aside from narration. I was given this book free for an honest review.

Creepy Kids!

The story was pretty creepy, but the narration didn't really fit with the vibes of it. A man checks into a rundown motel after splitting up with his wife. Instead of a decent night's sleep, he encounters a pair of creepy, black-eyed kids tapping on his door. The imagery was creepy and scary and the ending of the story was perfect horror.

This is the second book I have listened to with this narrator and it will be my last. Her performance and voice just irritate me. Also, over half of this "book" is a prologue and a couple of chapters from another book (which is not mentioned in the description)! The book is labeled as a novella, but is only a short story. Glad I didn't spend any money on this one.

Very enjoyable

This book is amazing from beginning to end, definitely has that horror feeling and definitely gives you that not of scary feeling. Two kids haunting an old man. Overall excellent book to listen to.