Isr Kale's Journal

The Alchemist, Book 4

By: Vasily Mahanenko, Jared Firth - translator

Narrated by: Henry W Kramer

These were dark times for Tailyn Vlashich, the 12-year-old alchemist. He'd been banished from the empire. The academy had summarily dismissed him. A deadly killer had been dispatched to hunt him. He'd been dropped all the way down to level one. But while there weren't many adults who would have been able to cope with the litany of problems Tailyn was facing, they weren't him. And he had help - two mentors, his girl, and a friend. Not only that, but there was an ancient journal hidden somewhere in the academy dean's office that held the secret to the location of the dragon's blood. It was time to drop by and get their hands on it. All they had to do was clear one small hurdle: How were they going to get into the planet's most heavily guarded building?

©2020 V. Mahanenko; English translation copyright 2020 by Jared Firth (P)2021 Tantor

Review

Another great performance!. Enjoy the story of the characters and great character development, my only regret is that the series is very short and in hindsight I should’ve waited until a box set came out and got all the books in one.

Great book

But they decided to go ahead and add the multiple skill read outs and introduce city building, which is unfortunate for my skipping finger. The plot is still interesting though and I will be listening to the next book. Edit: read the reviews for the next book and they all said the characters just fall flat. Maybe I’ll hold on to my credit then.

An MC in a world filled with jerks. Every supporting character are arrogant and self serving idiots.

Cool headed MC and likeable but practically every supporting character around are all jerks. His adventures are fun but very chaotic and sometimes the author doesn't seem to know where to direct the story. The author would take a whole novel to preface a certain direction then the author abandons that direction and go a different yet not so great direction.
The narrator has a good voice but always sounds like he's in a hurry to spit out the lines. Pauses and narration cadence is weak.

great book

great continuing of the series I really like this book I'll have to listen to it a couple more times hope everybody enjoys this book as much as I did

another author wrecks a great story

wow. I still don't understand author haven't figurered by dwindling sales administration even post apocalyptic administration is boring. it took me 3 months and that by skipping chapters to get to the end . overall the continuation of story itself was good. a child leader. really???really???? ugh. so u got beat up in school. let it go. your boring us. I see a future wedgy for you.

nerfed

that's twice that the op character gets nerfed. why?! there are umpteen other people with his attribute that could have done 100x what the mc did that just didn't but for some reason the mc is the reason the system gets nerfed. it's so annoying

Jusy okay

Kinda getting annoying that he keeps getting screwed by the system for fairness, but the enemies have unfair advantages. Character still only winning via luck. what is the point of all his hard work when it comes down to luck on everything.