EARTH's ALPHA PRIME Vol.1

a LitRPG System Survival

De: MN 1223

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Jay, a young mixed martial arts trainer, never expected his life to change in an instant. Selected by the mysterious System as one of Earth’s eleven Alpha Chosen, he is thrust into the Trial Program—a brutal intergalactic challenge that sends him to the Trial World, a deadly planet overrun by monstrous creatures.

To survive the horrors of the Trial World, the Alpha Chosen must fight, adapt, and grow stronger. Jay, however, possesses a unique talent, a game-changing edge that allows him to grow faster and stronger than anyone else. Rising rapidly through the ranks, he carves his path to the top of the Trial World’s hierarchy.

Watch as Jay rises to the top and claims his position as the ALPHA PRIME among the millions of Alpha Chosen across the Milky Way Galaxy.

Fun story, lazy execution.

The narration could have been much better with minimal effort, it's almost if nobody bothered to listen to it or if they did, couldn't be bothered to fix the issues. Narration aside I enjoyed the story of an OP MC.

Typical web novel. Everything is black/white.

The story starts out alright but quickly the mc just gets everything handed to him. Gets a power that no one has heard of and might be the only one in the universe to have, and all problems seem to just get fixed without too much of a fuss. The narration got annoying every time you had to hear the abreaviation of lvl dot(lvl.) It really made the whole thing a bit more mechanical and i get its AI but its not all that bad. Just a standard web novel not much depth.

not the worst narration, but

the story was great which made it worth the pain of the virtual voice narration. it was mostly OK but it was terrible when it came to going over the stats. what really gets me is when they will one time say a word right an the latter in the same paragraph say it wrong. such as the word bow. One time they will say it right as in bow and arrow and the next they will say it bow as in bow down. this one also apparently doesn't recognize contractions and will say apostrophe instead of just saying an s at the end of the name or wortd. also sometimes instead of saying a name it will spell it out.. very annoying that and saying l v instead of level.

the AI narration could have been

better. Maybe have a listen first before publishing. You would definitely find the issues pretty quickly and I dont know if the AI narration could learn from inputs. definitely a good book great story. Just hope it gets better. there are some incredible narrators that would do this book well! I understand it might now be in the budget for now but maybe in the future it could be done

Not bad

First virtual voice i’ve listened to and it wasn’t that bad. There was a couple of quirks where I thought there should’ve been emotional inferences but again I wouldn’t of known if you wouldn’t have told me that it was a virtual voice. Pretty decent book. can’t wait for the next one.

If you're going to use AI

lean into it. Why have the AI imitate a bad VA. Use different voices for the characters instead of having the AI act like a VA trying to use subtle ranges for the different characters. I mean there are VAs that can change their voice for different characters, but I know not every author can afford them. The author wrote a great book. I just think if you're using AI as a VA then lean into it.