Dirty Shot by My Brother’s Best Friend

A Second Chance Fake Relationship Short Romance

De: Livvy Stone

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Nerdy girls like me don’t stand a chance with hunky, billionaire hockey gods.
Yet I’m dating one.
And even though it’s a fake relationship, it sure doesn’t feel fake under the covers.

I’ve never forgotten that deliriously sizzling night I met Noah Harrington.
He rescued me from a wilderness car crash,
and our physical connection alone electrified his cabin.

He told me he'd never been married.
But then I saw his wedding photos.

No need sticking around for a liar.

Years later, my brother gets me a job with his hockey team.
And surprise.
I meet his best friend, the team star: Noah, who doesn’t even recognize me.

But I know him. Maybe.
I mean he’s stupid hot and way too charming for nerdy me,
and then there are those wedding photos that haunt my thoughts,
but I can’t keep my mind (and my hands) off this bad boy.

Things shift when I try to get away from a handsy co-worker
and I impulsively blurt out that Noah’s my boyfriend.
Noah will play along if I agree to pretend for his family also.

Game on.


This passionate love story promises a deliciously sweet happily ever after that will leave you swooning.
No cheating, no violence, just pure, heart-pounding love.

Cute and brief

Having only 1 voice, female made listening terrible. Her voice was soft and sweet, easy to listen to. The story in Itself was ok.

Cute Story - Virtual Narration not so much

Easy listening to a simple story with an interesting meet cute (if you can ignore the obvious) but the virtual narration was a huge miss.

the story and virtual voice is awful

story really has no content and the virtual voice makes it even worse the story needed more meat and potatoes through the storyline

Not the best

The narration is stilted.
The one voice has no inflection.
I couldn’t differentiate between the characters, it took way too long to realize when the character dialogue changed.
The pronunciation of touché was ridiculous, someone should at least listen to the story prior to release to fix language screw ups.
SPOILERS:
The story is not that great. I doubt the team would have a full workout after playing a game.
Hard to believe he doesn’t recognize the main female character when he sees her again since he was just obsessing about her in the workout room even if she had braces & glasses.
Don’t think a pro team’s web pages would be outdated.
Shocking that a lawyer would so blatantly open himself up to a sexual harassment allegation but a predator is a predator.
Why would it matter if he lets her know he saw her in the hallway, stupid thing to make a point over.
Odd that a player would have an office in the sports arena.
Lost interest around chapter 5 & stopped the story.