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Jefferson Greenidge ? Ok no yes ? How much is that ? What about you ? ? ?

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F*cking everything

I loved f*cking everything I mean how couldn’t I this sh*ts amazing also those moans were fucking perfect

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Lame, lame, lame!!

I listened for about four minutes before I gave up. The narrator's intonation resembled that of a teenager reading to five-year-olds at storytime in the public library. As for the writing, where do I begin? Actually, there is not much to say. It's as shallow as a day-old puddle in summer. Has the writer ever heard of foreplay? Building up the excitement? Since written (or recorded) work lacks visual stimuli, the author should use words to stimulate the reader's responses. This "story" doesn't even have a sensual physical description of the players, which is the minimum one expects in a piece meant to evoke, at the very least, a physical response. How about something like "he felt her muscles flex under his weight, and her body shuddered as she was swept by a wave of pleasure" instead of "she c-me"? Erotica is not mechanics; evoking the reader's senses achieves arousal that a line from an instruction manual doesn't!

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