The Shadow-Line

De: Joseph Conrad

Narrado por: Fred Williams

Written at the start of the Great War, when his son Borys was at the Western Front, The Shadow-Line is Conrad's supreme effort to open man's eyes to the meaning of war through the stimulus of art. In many ways an autobiographical narrative, this masterpiece of his final period relates the story of a young and inexperienced sea captain whose first command finds him with a ship becalmed in tropical seas and a crew smitten with fever. As he wrestles with his conscience and with the sense of isolation that his position imposes, the captain crosses the "shadow-line" between youth and adulthood.

It is the qualities, both individual and collective, needed to confront the ship's crisis that symbolize the qualities needed by humanity, not only to face evil and destruction but also to come to terms with life.

©1923 Joseph Conrad (P)2000 Blackstone Audiobooks

Story of taking on responsibilities

Obstacles and hardships must be overcome during a first command of a ship's captain. The narration was average.

The introspection of the moment

At 19 I had to read this story for a course in college. I fell asleep after a few pages. Today at seventy-eight I find myself drawn to the introspection of the narrator as he grows and judges his behavior—it reminds me of my own coming of age. Conrad’s choice of words provide a deep understanding of those moments of doubt, awareness and understanding. I may at some point re-read the story and write down his words—as a way of articulating my own path of growth—to give myself even more appreciation for living.

Old-fashioned seafaring tale. Superb narration.

Conrad was originally going to call this novella “First Command.” Although it’s a work of fiction, his introduction makes clear that it’s somewhat autobiographical, drawing upon Conrad’s own youthful experience when he was made the captain of a troubled sailing ship. And although the introduction denies any supernatural element, readers are bound to think, at times, that the vessel has been put under a curse by its previous captain, a mysterious malevolent despot now deceased. They’re also likely to think of “The Rime of the Ancient Mariner.”

The writing is at times magnificent – impeccably phrased, filled with wisdom – and yet also at times wearyingly wordy. Every line of conversation, for example, every turn of a man’s head or change of expression, is minutely described and overanalyzed in a way no modern writer would dare. Conrad takes paragraphs to say things that nowadays would take a sentence or two, and his philosophical asides can sometimes be hard to follow.

Another problem is that the story is oddly shapeless, in that the first quarter or so is concerned with incidents on shore, at a private hostelry for seamen, that lead in a roundabout way to the young narrator’s taking command of the ship. We learn a lot more than we need to about this establishment and the various characters who reside there. And yet, maybe because of its exotic Asian setting, I found this seemingly extraneous portion quite fascinating and enjoyable – easily as enjoyable, in fact, as the adventure at sea.

What made the book so enjoyable, I think, was the really superb reading by Fred Williams. He has the perfect voice and delivery for it, to the point where I actually searched Audible for other things he’s narrated. A couple of commenters have criticized his reading; I’m baffled by this, and agree with something I came across in an audiobook review: “Fred Williams’s mature, gravelly voice carries all the weight of age and experience as surely as if the graying Conrad himself were, years later, telling the tale of his own first command. It is a harrowing but heartwarming story read with the wizened dignity that only an older reader can create. Let’s hear more from Fred Williams.”

Good story, and well-honed characters

A captain in his first command is tested by failing winds and a sick crew. The crux of the story, however, rests with the captain’s interactions with mate, the cook/steward, and a couple of crewmen still capable of performing their duties. The pace is slow, but oddly suspenseful at the same time.

The narrator’s languid delivery may, for some, complement the pace of the story itself, but I found it a bit too much.

Overall, strongly recommended for any fan of Conrad’s sea stories.

Wonderful rendition all round

Perfect example of Conrad’s genius andthe narration was superb. I will be looking for anything else that features this narrator.

A Reflexion on Maturity

"a man should stand up to his bad luck, to his mistakes, to his conscience and all that sort of thing Why--what else would you have to fight against?"
-- Joseph Conrad, The Shadow-Line

One of Conrad's later novels. This one was published in 1917. The story is pretty straight forward, the plot direct. It isn't an elaborate story, but one that explores that moment, that shadow-line between youth and adulthood. The basic story involves a young officer, suddenly thrust into command. During his first voyage he is tested and learns about strength, duty, obligation, etc. It is a story about maturity, wisdom, experience.

I'm not sure if my love of sea stories is directly tied to Conrad, or if my love of Conrad comes from my love of sea stories. The genre and the writer are both so closely mixed in my brain. What I do know is I love the morality of Conrad. I love his affection for men, for work, for duty, for the sea. I also love his modernist bent toward psychology and the untidy unknown. Mostly, I love the clean, tight precision of his prose (which often conflicts with his ambiguous narratives). This isn't top-shelf Conrad, but shouldn't be ignored by his devoted fans.

A simpler, lighter novel by Conrad

Like "Lord Jim," this is a story about a young man and his behavior when in a position of responsibility. Unlike "Lord Jim," the protagonist is a very straightforward young man without a neurotic or narcissistic bone in his healthy, young body. There's plenty of adventure and menace to keep you entertained, and a lot less "Naval-gazing" (sorry, couldn't resist the pun) than there was in "Lord Jim." I like "arty" classical literature, but I like a plain, good story even better! I also enjoyed the gentle pace of the telling. That works well for me as my imagination conjures up the image to match the author's words. I don't like to be rushed when the writing is this good.

Monotone delivery

Great story delivered in monotone. the narrator read the story... It was no performance. Disappointing!

Disappointed

I'm a fan of Joseph Conrad, but this isn't his best work. It's windy and over-written, and seems dated, unlike most of his work. It's not helped by the narrator, who sounds like an old fogey sitting in an armchair with a plaid rug over his legs, and who often seems to get the rhythm or emphasis wrong.

The story is of a young man on his first real command, and though it's told in retrospect at the end of his career the narration was out of sync with the story, which needed to be told more vigorously, and by a person you could imagine once was a man of action. I was disappointed - though clearly others thought different - and might have given it an extra star had it been read as it should have been.