Take My EX, I'll Take Your Daddy

De: Anastasia Slash, Bella Curvy

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

I knew I shouldn't have any feelings for him, but the situation was too wild to ignore. When I received a wedding invitation, I was shocked to see that my ex was getting married. While I should have been upset, a part of me was tempted to attend the wedding.

My friends encouraged me to enjoy myself, meet someone new, and lose my virginity. I had an incredible evening with a billionaire, and I couldn't stop smiling.

However, there was a major issue. The billionaire wanted an heir, and it turns out he is my ex's future father-in-law!

Story doesn't make sense- inconsistency

Story doesn't make sense as the mfc says she does one thing and then a chapter later it's like that never happened. Several times this happened before I quit listening with about an hour left.

bad edit

wierd book. did not understand half of it. no sense in the order. kinda sucks. idea is good. but not well done.

All over all over the place, repeated stories for out of order, rewritten and rewarded constantly

I do not recommend until it has been edited and cleaned up. How’s a good storyline if you can untangled the spaghetti of the way it has been written.

wow

Story is good but.... wow story jumps all over the place. I feel like I was drunk while listening to it. Proofreading would have helped a lot.

gets worse

Lily looses virginity to Logan, then all of the sudden it could be Tylers WTF.

So confused

Could have been a good story line but I’m pretty sure the chapters are out of order . Can’t figure out what’s real because every chapter it changes what happened the previous chapter .

The worst thing I’ve encountered on here

I have nearly 500 books in my library on here, and have listened to many more and this is the absolute worst, don’t waste your time…

Must have been a very early book

the girl is immature and I can't figure out what was so wonderful about her. the book is 80% sex; having, thinking about, and being asked about sex. I was extremely disappointed. this has to be a very early book, before she knew to write a book with depth.

I was a good concept for a story but was not executed well

Needs proof reading and major editing. Some characters names change. There are multiple scenes that are repeated. Punctuation and grammer need attention. What little plot and character depth there is is difficult to follow.

jealousy and greed

overall I like the plot but hate the virtual voice. it don't seems authentic too me but I like the story there should be an part 2 I would like it.