Princess's Revenge

An Age-Gap Enemies to Lovers Reverse Harem Romance

De: Raven Blaire

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

A special delivery with photos of my groom screwing other women,

Sends me bolting from the church right into the massive arms of my abductors.

My three oversized alpha captors have much bigger plans for me than walking down the aisle.

Anthony my Silver Fox, has a sex appeal that makes him impossible to resist.

Christopher likes it rough, with his big bulging… muscles.

And Francis, my protector is sweet and kind and hot as hell.

These smoking hot brothers have ignited burning desires deep inside me.

They’ve vowed to help me get my revenge on the ones who killed my family.

They’re teaching me how and protecting me.

But who will protect me from them?

I feel myself falling hard.

One by one they mold me to their will.

I can’t resist them.

I won’t resist them.

With my newfound freedom, I can have everything I want.

And I want them but will they share me?

Or will my needs break the sacred bond between brothers?

Mediocre and awkward

This was... okay, I guess. The base storyline wasn't bad overall, the problem was it's execution, especially when it comes to the intimate scenes. There are some... bizarre metaphors, such as 'baby gravy' for things mentioned during these intimate encounters that leave you going... wtf? and almost forgetting what you're supposed to be hearing. Sure, people use various terms for different things, but some of them are just distracting. In addition, many of the characters are flat, 2-dimensional characters who seem to be little more than plot points, rather than actual individuals. These 'mafia' guys are also the biggest bunch of pansies I've ever heard of. No made guy is going to basically roll over when he's outgunned, and they sure as hell do not whine like babies when they get caught with their pants down. These guys basically pee their pants when confronted with what's likely to be certain death. Most of these mafia types would spit in your face and cuss you until you drew out the last drops of their blood, unless you rendered them mute or unconscious.

Not a fan of virtual voice

This had potential to be a better story if not read by virtual voice. Some of the story development was rushed and character development was lacking, exacerbated by the vv.