OYENTE

Toney

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I could kiss u i'm so happy!😍

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 09-22-24

you are the second best person in the world besides the person who invented ninjago!😍😘thank u soooooo much broskie!! 😍

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Not my normal read.

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5 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
5 out of 5 stars
Historia
5 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 06-09-22

I read this for genre writing research. I don’t like sex in books and I’ll be honest, I don’t think all the sex scenes were necessary or particularly well written. However, the rest of the story was on point. I come from abuse. I knew the moment his character arrived what sort of man he was and as the story progressed, I was mad at the author for making him the hero. I thought she wrote him wrong. She did not. She was spot on. I saw the red flags she carefully, tactfully planted. The red flags you don’t see unless you’ve been there. I don’t read sex books, but this isn’t just a sex book. This is an important book for women and men too. Yes, I wish there was less explicit sex, I think she could have gotten the same message across with half as much, but it was agony to read “my” story, to know where I have been and could still be. It brings awareness and realism to a real problem and I hope it opens peoples eyes to the “why” these things happen. Well done, Colleen.

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Redundant and poor conflicts

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2 out of 5 stars
Ejecución
3 out of 5 stars
Historia
2 out of 5 stars

Revisado: 03-06-22

I wanted to like this book, but I overall didn't. The story could have been fun and compelling, but the conflict that was focused on was weak and forced. The prose were constantly being repeated (things similar to "He grew to like the way she laughed.", " He had really become attached to how she laughed."") and there was far too much telling instead of showing. The conflict was forced and frustrating. The characters kissed multiple times and walked away from each other thinking "too bad he doesn't like me." It was infuriating and not in a good way. Even after they admitted they loved each other, the VERY next scene she was shocked that he didn't want an annulment and he was still offering her one. And there were a few scenes where they felt out of character. He's supposed to be a noble character, but made no fuss at all when her uncle struck her twice. He's painted as a compassionate caring person, then around the end of the book he's suddenly described as someone who doesn't care about others and is cynical about love when he admitted multiple times to himself that he loved her...what?? Where did that come from? So much focus was put on them not communicating when a simple "would you consider staying with me?" would have ended that ridiculous conflict by the third chapter, then they COULD have focused on the uncle tearing them apart and creating a real problem instead of having them make out, then wonder why they couldn't be together! The humor was great and I had some moments where I laughed out loud, but I am disappointed in the overall story. I didn't like an English period book being read by an American, but I got used to it. I would much rather have had an accent that fits the place, though.

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