Super Hot!

A sexy, hot story that makes you want more. It is short, but sweet. Sierra Kline does awesome job. She has a great voice that is so expressive. Hope Jody Darling. writes more like this, but makes it into a real story, with multiple chapters that give a whole and more complete view. The writing is so hot and exciting.

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Excellent!

Wonderful fantasy! Jacked off a number of times! Escapeisum at its finest! More like this one!

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Good, small, tasty nibble

For a very brief story, this author did a great job with exquisite, sexual and sensual detail. And the story is set up well to move directly into the sexual aspect, which is the point of this kind of brief erotica. It’s been 16 years since Kerry and Brad lived together while Brad was married to Kerry’s mom. In this story, Kerry is still in school, so that makes her seem a bit younger than the 21-years-old described in the Audible description. Their attraction to each other is mutually and immediate. But, appropriately, Brad struggles with his attraction to Kerry. Once they began to act on their lust, they both play an active role. So there is not a one-sided seduction. There is very little “daddy” language, once indirectly and once directly. And Brad refers to her as his baby girl & sweet girl once or twice. It’s just sex, which included separate acts of masturbation prior to the intercourse commencing. You don’t hear anything about their future or the outcome of their unprotected sex, though “breeding,” as Brad calls it, is spoken of. The only sex scene occurs on the kitchen floor, so romance is not the goal. If it were longer, I would probably give it a higher score. But it ends just when it gets going, really. And you don’t know the outcome of anything. Still, it's a good, small, tasty nibble

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