First Time Gay: Shocking Surprise by My Roommate
Gay Romance, Bisexual Romance, Book 2
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In First Time Gay: Shocking Surprise by My Roommate, the steamy relationship between James and his roommate (and captain of the college's basketball team), Mark, becomes more and more intense, hotter and hotter, and more and more kinky.
After both a sensuous and spasmodic introduction in First Time Gay 1: The Present, Mark decides to take it a step further and adds some spice to his encounter with James.
Having left James blindfolded and tied up in their bedroom, Mark comes back expecting to take full advantage of his "present", James. And so he does, passionately and sensuously, in a steaming hot scene. But what James does not know is that Mark's kinky side is quite creative, and he still has an extra saucy surprise in store for James.
Slowly becoming more dominant, Mark makes James explode with real passion and lust before having hard and unprotected anal with him. Yet even when he finally has a quickie with James, Mark still makes him learn a few lessons, making him gag and beg for more, taking his time, as James is now at his disposal.
In the meantime there may be someone else in the room, which James is not aware of....
Author's note: This audiobook is not suitable for listeners under the age of 18.
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- Trio
- 04-02-20
What a performance by Jason Frazier!
⭐⭐⭐⭐ for the audio
Fans of male-male erotica, you've got to check out this audiobook. And audiobook lovers, if you've not already a fan, you will be when you listen to Jason Frazier perform it! Sultry, sexy, and mind-bendingly erotic, what Frazier does to Johnson Woodstock’s Shocking Surprise By My Roommate is hot AF!
The second novel in Johnson Woodstrong’s First Time Gay series, Shocking Surprise By My Roommate is the story of James’ first MM experience. (I didn’t read the first book in the series, but trust me, you don’t need to.)
Woodstrong sets up a nice little story, and while some of the terms Woodstrong uses aren’t the ones I prefer, Jason Frazier elevates this novel with his incredibly erotic performance. Building the tension right from the start, and infusing so much emotion into each character’s experiences, his performance in this one is truly spectacular. At only 34 minutes long, Shocking Surprise By My Roommate is well worth a listen.
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- ButtonsMom2003
- 02-29-20
Great narrator!
Short, hot as fire, and I loved Jason Frazier's performance.
I was gifted a copy of this audiobook but that did not influence my opinion or rating.
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- Readers 4Life
- 01-14-20
Meh, not a winner for me.
Story reminded me of phone sex. Just a sex scene, with a (for me) predictable ending. Not a bad story at all, just not unique like I was hoping for. (And I never want to hear the word helmet again. Way overused.)
Narrator Jason Frazier is VERY breathy, which I don't care for, but I do love the tone of his voice. I almost always listen at normal speed, but I had to bump it all the way to 1.5 to make it a comfortable speed.
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- Booklover876🇯🇲
- 01-15-20
Erotic
What stands out for me was despite the title James didn't read like this was a first time experience for him. The way Mark treated him and his acceptance made him seems more experienced. That said, this 34 minute listen is pure sex, so if you're looking for some character development or story building you will be disappointed. This was straight smut which I was ok with. I usually love Jason Frazier's voice but he was too breathy in this and it was very distracting
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- Sandy
- 01-14-20
Book 2
Short and kinky. I always enjoy listening to this narrator; Love listening to his voice.
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- B.McGrath
- 01-07-20
Initiation???
Well talk about helping friends in need out! Wow! Another quick hot listen thst held my attention the whole time. Ears perked up!! Immensely enjoyed it. The narrator's voice was hawt!! AF !!! I voluntarily listened to a free copy of this story and am giving an honest review
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- Amazon Customer
- 03-18-20
so cringe-y
I received a free copy of this audiobook in exchange for an honest review.
I was quite literally cringing within the first two minutes. Firstly, I didn't realize I was coming into the middle of a story line, so I definitely missed the context. This is why I usually research books before accepting copies for review, so that is on me. However, I don't feel that context would've fixed the issues I had.
My issues were:
1. The narration didn't work for me; it was breathy and drawling and there was too much moaning - others may appreciate this more than I did
2. The word choices were SO CRINGE-Y! This is not because I'm a prude, as I have appreciated many explicit sex scenes; the word choices in this scene are just so awkward.
3. One specific word became a point of its own because it was used so much. "Helmet" was used in nearly every sentence to describe the head of the penis. I don't remember any of the adult romances or erotica books I've read using that word, so seeing it used so much was disconcerting.
4. One of the characters brought a third person into their play without the knowledge or consent of the other character who couldn't see, which I think is completely unacceptable, even in erotic fiction.
The only reason I finished this was because I felt I had to in order to give the most thorough review possible. I did speed it up to 1.75x narration speed part way through just to get through it (even though I am normally a 1.25x type of girl).
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- Zara
- 05-18-20
at least it was short
not sure what to say about this, the story had "porn" like potential. but the execution was not really a success. the narrator sounded out of breath and strained. I wont listen to this again
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